Narrative Writing

This week we've been doing narrative writing and we had to make up a interesting story,this is mine.

It suddenly started raining as Kovile was watching a movie , she started feeling cold and got out of bed to turn on her heater but as she got up everything suddenly started feeling different, Kovile forgot what she was going to do and started feeling hungry she went to the kitchen and opened the fridge Koville's mouth opened wide as she saw a bar of chocolate but at that moment Kio Kovile’s older brother came in and said”that's my chocolate you've already eaten your share leave it”.Kovile started crying and their mum came in and said “both of you stop fighting go in you room and find something else to do and that's Kio’s chocolate leave it you've already eaten your share”.Kovile started crying even more and ran in her room and shut the door so hard a glass vase that was in her mom's room feel down and shattered into pieces.Kovile was sobbing for a long time and all of a sudden she started looking at the photo frame beside her bed of her and her best friend Kyla,they hadent seen each other for like one year and started crying even more straight away she started feeling dizzy and fell down on the ground.




Kovile started feeling cold and suddenly woke up she got up and realized that she wasn't in her room she was at a train station it was silent snow started falling down it got even more cold she started yelling help but there was no one around .All of sudden a strange man came up behind Kovile and gave her a jacket and all of a sudden disappeared.It was really dark at night and many people started coming and didn't even say a word,Kovile started looking around and saw a huge chocolate fountain but the only thing Kovile wanted to do was go back home to her family but she didn't know how.After waiting for 2 minutes Kovile was wanted to ask the tall strange guy beside her where she was but she was too nervous just then Kovile heard a loud noise,it was a train but then kovile thought that someone kidnapped her left her at a strange train station,As the train stopped everyone started getting on. It looked like everyone was going home from work Kovile though this might be a way home so she got on with really strange quite people her heart started pounding as she thought she might never get home to her family but she had to take the risk tears wanted to fall out of her eyes but they stopped as if something good was gonna happen.Time passed by and people started getting off the train and going to their family Kovile’s legs started shaking with fear and her hands started sweating with nervousness , things were very strange here it wasn't normal there were hills and mountains floating on the air ,chocolate flowing in the river instead of water. This wasn't a normal world this was something different.As Kovile looked around no one was in the train everyone had already gone to their family but KOvile looked in front the train driver wasn't there he had disappeared. The train kept on going, it wasn't stopping Kovile got up from her seat and went up the front .The train track had a dead end .Kovile thought this is the time where everything ends for her she's gonna die her heart started pounding even more she was more scared than she ever was.she closed her eyes and that's when the train fell it had been a minute and the train continued falling .Kovile opened her eyes and saw that she was on the ground alive she got up terror and started walking there was a glowing light in front.It was a girl,the girl looked up and Kovile’s mouth opened wide with happiness “OH MY GOD its you what are you doing here kyla” ased Kovile.”I'm coming over at your house” said Kyla.Kovile fell down on the ground and woke up in her room she got up went to her mom's room and asked “do you know where i was” “yes you were in your room fast asleep”her mom replied.Some one started knocking on the door Kovile went up to the door and opened it.It was Kyla Kovile started jumping with excitement and hugged Kyla “we haven't seen each other for a long time lets go play outside.After a while Kovile realized that what happened was all just a dream and continued having fun playing outside in the rain with Kyla.